Ennathaeyum pollae annum njan trainintae side seatil thannae irunnu…Samayam pokan vendi njan veruthae jalakathiloodae purathaek nokki..Savadhanam trainlil thikkum thrirakkum koodi koodi vannu.Ennitum njan aa jalakathiloodae purathaek thannae nokki irunnu…Chekkeran chillayillathae evidae ninno parannu vanna kurae deshadana pakshikal chakravalathae lakshyamakki parannu akannu……
Kurach samayathinu shasham nik ethirae ulla seat oru yuvathi kai adakki.Avalae poornamayum oru yuvathi ennu paranju kooda..Sharik paranjal oru kaumarakari.Kaiyil phoneum aayi aval aarko vendi kathirunnu.Samayam pinneyum izhanju neengi.Narmarasathod koodiyulla shabdham purapeduvich avaludae phonil pala pravashyam messagukal vannu.Aval dirithiyil enthokkayo type cheyunnundayirunnu.Oru pakshae a messaegukalkku ulla marupadi aayirunnirikkam ath…
Avalaeyum sharadich kond irunnath kondavam samayam poyath njan arinjilla.Appozhaekkum train orupad dooram sancharichirunnu.Kurach nerathinu shaesham train nik iranganulla stopil nirthi.Aa kaumarakariyae olikannit onnu koodi nokkiya shesham njan trainil ninnum irangi.!!!
Pittaennu oru avadhi divasam aayirunnu.Pothuvae thamasich ezhunelkkarulla njan annu pathivilum vaiki aanu enittath!!! Ennum alpalm choodod kudikarulla chaya nannai thanuthirunnu.Nkilum ammayudae shakaram bhayannu njan aa chaya thannae kudichu.!! Sadharana pathra vayanayod vimukhatha kattarulla nik annu mathram pathram vayikkanam ennu thonni.Samayam pokan vendi mathram njan aalasyathod koodi pathra thalukkal verauthae marich kondirunnu…Pettennu evidaeyo kanda oru mukam aa thalukalkku idayiloodae oru minnayam pollae kadannu poyi..Njan aa pathra varthayilek onnu shradich nokki..
“Pranaya nairashyam-yuvathi jeevanodukki” enna thalakettinu thazhaeyai njan innale kanda athae kaumarakariyudae foto!!!!!!
Appol pand engo vayich oru pushthakathillae varikal nta manasiloodae kadannu poyi.
”Pranayam Vakkukal kond theertha oru spadika saudham mathram aanu….!!!”
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ReplyDeleteAadyame thannae nae prolsahippichathinu oru THANX paranjottae...
Thanx mathram alla nik parayan ullath.
verae oru karyam koodi
Suhurthaee...
njan ividae udesichath thangal vellithirayil kanunnath pollaeyulla oru suspense thriller alla.Njan nta oru divasathae anubhavam ividae pankku vaikkuka aanu cheythirikkunath.
"pranayam bhrathamaya oru avastayanu manushynu mayika lokham samanichu neeerkumila polle potti pokuna onu" enna thagaludae abhiprayathod vyakthiparamai nik yogikkan patilla.Pandu engo vayichu maranna varikal appo manasiloodae kadannu poyath kond ath avidae kurichu ennu mathram.