Jeevithamae,
Ne enna naadakavaedhi
Enik thannath
Oru komalliyudae
Vaesham aayirunnu..
Santhoshapoorvam
Njan ath sweekarichu
Karanam
Aa vaesham thannaeyayirunnu
Enik eattavum yojichath
Ennu njan karuthi…
Anganae njan
Palarudaeyum jeevithathil
Oru komalliyai maari..
Ennnae nokki palappozhum
Avar chirichu.
Pinnae eppozho njan
Enna kommalli sadhasil
Vachu ariyathae
Pottikaranju poyi….
Sadasyarae eppozhum
Chirippikaenda oru
Komalli orikalum sadhasil
Karayan Padilla ennathanu
Nadakachattam
Athae
Njan enna komalli
Evidae vacho
Parajayapettirikunnu…
Ini e komalliyudae
Vaesham enik chernnathalla
Innu njan e komalliyudae
Vaesham azhikkukayanu…
Ini orikkalum naadaka
Arangil njan illa..
Pakshae ennum
Sadhasyaril oru
praekshakanai njan
ennum undavuka
thannae cheyyum..
innu njan manasilakunnu
ellavarkkum naadaka
kadhaapaathramgalae
nannai avatharippikan
kazhiyilla…
chilar enkilum
naadaka aaswadakar
aayae mathiyaaku..
Ini ennum njan oru
Nalla naadaka aaswadakan
Aayirikkan shramikkunnathayirikkum…..
Jeevithamae,
Ne enna naadakavaedhi
Enik thannath
Oru komalliyudae
Vaesham aayirunnu..
Santhoshapoorvam
Njan ath sweekarichu
Karanam
Aa vaesham thannaeyayirunnu
Enik eattavum yojichath
Ennu njan karuthi…
Anganae njan
Palarudaeyum jeevithathil
Oru komalliyai maari..
Ennnae nokki palappozhum
Avar chirichu.
Pinnae eppozho njan
Enna kommalli sadhasil
Vachu ariyathae
Pottikaranju poyi….
Sadasyarae eppozhum
Chirippikaenda oru
Komalli orikalum sadhasil
Karayan Padilla ennathanu
Nadakachattam
Athae
Njan enna komalli
Evidae vacho
Parajayapettirikunnu…
Ini e komalliyudae
Vaesham enik chernnathalla
Innu njan e komalliyudae
Vaesham azhikkukayanu…
Ini orikkalum naadaka
Arangil njan illa..
Pakshae ennum
Sadhasyaril oru
praekshakanai njan
ennum undavuka
thannae cheyyum..
Innu njan manasilakunnu
ellavarkkum naadaka
kadhaapaathramgalae
nannai avatharippikan
kazhiyilla ennu...
chilar enkilum
naadaka aaswadakar
aayae mathiyaaku..
Ini ennum njan oru
Nalla naadaka aaswadakan
Aayirikkan shramikkunnathayirikkum…..
To be frank, something is missing somewhere.U should make it better........
ReplyDeleteJeevithanadakathile mattangangale manassilakkatheyanu e ezhuth ennu vayikkumbol manassilakunnu. So ninne snehikkunnavareyenkilum manassilakkuka. Then u will get a different view towards life.otherwise this wil hurt someone.
aayirikkan sramikkunnathayirikkum enna prayogam thettalle vinayaaa.....??
ReplyDeletePriyapetta Arju
ReplyDeleteEntae parimithamaya aarivu vachu njan aa prayogathil thetilla ennu vishwasikunnu....Any way thanx for ur comment.... Keep commenting on my articles....
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ReplyDelete"aayirikkan shramikkum" ennu pore???
ReplyDeletelast linile ninte prayogam correct aanennu thanneya enta viswasam. One small suggestion, end punch sradhikanam. oru article or oru poem vaayichal athu nammude manasil thattunathil athinte last sentencinu oru alavu vare importance undu.
ReplyDelete@ Syama : Ini punch-intae aavashaym illa...
ReplyDeleteEppol thannae ellarum enae orupad punch cheyth kazhinjirikunnu... :(