Orkut enna Cha(nga)thikoottam...
Aa vazhiyil njan ottayk aayirunnu..
Evidae vacho njan avalae kandu mutti.
Aval ntae adutha suhurthai.
Pinnae aa vazhiyiloodae nammal
orumich yathra thudarnnu...
Aa yathrakku idayil evidae vacho njangal
oru sauhrida koottayimayae kandu mutti.
Njangal avarumai sauhridam sthapichu.
Njangal avarod oppam yathra thudarnnu...
Aa yathrakkidayil evidae vacho
ntae kaalukal thalarnnu..
Entae yathrayudae vegatha kuranju.
Appozhum aval avarod
oppam thannae yathra thudarnnu..
Ippol avar ellam orupad akalae aayirikkunnu.
Ippol avalk chuttum orupad suhurthukkal und
Pazhaya pollae njan ippol ottaykum aayirikkunnu...
Entae Prarthana:-ORKUTum FACEBOOKum pollae ulla sauhrida kootayimakal ningaludae suhurthukkalae ningalil ninnum verpeduthathirikkattae....
NicE !!!
ReplyDeletebt Jst Need Sm More LIfe !!!
S, I knw U Cud DO iT!!!
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ReplyDeleteu started well...bt something lost towards the end...anyways u got a gud language....gear it up...all th best da kuttaaa!!!!!
ReplyDeletenice work...try to avoid repetitions ( aa yathrakkidayil,oppam yathra thudarnnu..)
ReplyDeleteall d bst...
A small comment, dnt knw if it is correct or not, in the last sentence, i think this will be better.. "Jeevithathinte Vazhithaarayil Njan ennu Ekananu" or 'Jeevithamenna Paathayil Enne Thanichakki"
ReplyDeleteSyama...
ReplyDeleteathae ne paranjath thannae aanu shari ella ardhathilum...
thanx 4 ur comment
മലയാളത്തിൽ എഴുതിയാൽ നന്നായിരുന്നു.
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മലയാളത്തിൽ എഴുതിയാൽ നന്നായിരുന്നു.
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its true now freindships is seasonal you should add mobile phones tooooooo i experienced it so much.e boomiyil namalenu thanichanu ....ekantharaya yathrikar........
ReplyDelete@ jerrina paul : u r right my dear friend..
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